gleaming sticky strands

prove to be too great a lure

for naive drifters


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2 Responses to Snare

  1. The Hermit says:

    I’m not a poet, but I love haiku.

    Here’s a good one by Togyu:

    When autumn winds blow
    not one leaf
    remains the way it was.

  2. julie says:

    Thank you, Hermit – that is beautiful! I really need to read more real Japanese haiku. I know that mine is generally mere doggerel by comparison, but the discipline of the form is a great mental exercise. Which is why I shamelessly stole it from Robin Starfish.

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